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College Student looking For Fulltime Job As A Medical Assistant or CNA (Hampton Roads)
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Danielle,
One of the most important skills needed in the medical field, is the ability to be able to put words together to form a paragraph that is grammatically correct, and
makes sense to those attempting to read it. This includes, the correct use of punctuation, typing in the correct font size, and spelling words correctly, so that
you sound as though you are capable of performing the job for which you are applying. The following is a list of errors in your post:
-Typed in all caps-looks as though you are screaming
-Very little punctuation used, run on sentences, starting sentences with a small letter instead of a capital letter
-Many words spelled incorrectly. Examples include: assiated, should be assisted, I'm finish, should be I am finished, returing, should be returning,
contributionto, should be contribution to, and considerration, which should be consideration.
For an eight sentence message, the errors are obvious and stand out. Employers will not want to hire someone who cannot put together a simple eight sentences,
Brush up on your writing skills prior to posting any more letters, and at least use spell check on your postings.
Sorry to be so hard on you, but if you want to obtain gainful employment in any industry, you must be able to speak, spell, and put together communication
which makes sense,
Thanks,
A Grad Student. Location: Hampton Roads
Compensation: Free
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